Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Assessment Essay


Everyone Deserves a Chance:
My Experiences at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center in Seven Essential Questions
An Essay By: Ashlyn Buffum
8th Grade
Pine Point School
February 27, 2012
Have you ever helped anyone that you didn’t know? For my assessment site I was at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center, and I helped many people. I worked, saw, and learned about people that seemed to be in a whole different world, but in reality they were standing right next to me. All of my experiences at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center have changed me.
the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center pantry
I chose this particular service site for many reasons. First, the Pawcatuck Neighborhood center is close to my house in Westerly and also close to Pine Point School. The Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center was right in the middle of both. As a result, I was able to help a little closer to home. Also, my class was starting the assessment close to Christmas break and that is when the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center is most active. So I would be able to sort more donations for both clothes and food, but also work with toys. I would be able to work at one of the busiest times of the year for the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center. Lastly, Pine Point has worked with the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center before in the lower school. For example, in second grade my class helped in the garden at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center. Also, in third Grade we adopted a family and raised money by having a bake sale. I am glad I chose this site because this was the best thing that I ever did.
Although working at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center did not come without its hardships. For example, it was hard to see the clients of the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center struggling. They looked hungry and dirty. My heart went out to them and I could only imagine the hardships they were going through. It was also hard to turn down request for food or clothes they wanted when there was not enough. Another thing that was hard at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center was working at the clothes closet. I was unfamiliar with the sizes of clothes for men and sometimes labels were worn down and you were unable to see the label clearly. I had to guess at the clothes sizes and hope someone would be able to find what they needed. The last thing that was hard for me was talking to the people. Sometimes there was nobody my age at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center and I am shy. I had a hard time talking with other volunteers and also clients of the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center. All these hardships I overcame and as a result they made me grow as I person and learn a little bit more about myself.
packing Christmas presents
Every time I left the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center I felt accomplished in what I did. I packed food for Christmas, and also sorted the food. In addition, I checked thousands of cans for dates from donations. I later placed the can goods on either the “Free Table” or in the pantry for later use by the clients. Next, I stored food in the pantry, which will be given out to the clients of the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center, and also stacked boxes for the Backpack program. I also helped children have a happy Christmas by sorting toys so they go to the right people in the right towns. I also folded clothes and help clients of the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center find what they were looking for. I also sorted the donated clothes and hung those up in the right places. The final thing I did was help organize an art closet used by other programs of the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center. There were many things to be thrown away, but it felt nice to help people my age. Every time I helped a stranger at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center I felt good knowing I was helping them in their time of need.
When I started researching I learned many things. For example, I learned about donations and how the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center relies on them so much more than I thought. In addition, I learned that they have some foods that are more popular than others and as a result they need people to donate the foods they need. I also learned about the sections of the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center. Fortunately, during my time there I was able to work at most of the sections of the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center, but I truly learned about them when I started to research. For example, I learned about the senior center and how they transport the elderly to places they need to go or want to go. All this information I received from both the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center website and also a few of their news fliers. In addition, I also learned what the clients of the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center were going through. In my research I looked up the definition of poverty and this is what helped me understand something that I have never experienced. I found this definition on dictionary.com. I have seen many things at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center, but my research helped me understand the hardships of the world.
The themes of To Kill a Mockingbird can relate to the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center in many ways. For example, the theme courage is the courage to help someone you don’t know.. The volunteers at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center have the courage to help people when they don’t have to. This is just like when Atticus helped Tom when he barely knew him, but he still tried his best to help him through the hardship he was going through. Another, theme is adults helping children and this can relate to the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center because of how many sections of the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center are devoted to helping children. For example, the backpack program and also the toy drive help kids get food on the weekends and also receive toys on Christmas. This is almost like how Cal helps Scout and Jem with many things. For example, she plays with them, cooks for them, yells at them when they need it, and also care for them like a mother. Finally, the theme of loyalty and friendliness can relate to the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center because of the volunteers. The volunteers and workers are loyal to their work and also are friendly to every client that walks through the doors. This is almost like how the character Scout in To Kill a Mockingbird is very loyal to Dill. Also, how another character named Miss Maudie is very friendly to the children and everyone in her neighborhood. There are so many themes that can relate to the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center but these I feel are some of the best.
Even though I had a wonderful experience at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center I would have done three things differently. First, I would have liked to have worked with the backpack program more. The backpack program is a program that helps children receive food on the weekends. I feel that helping with the backpack program would have given me the opportunity to work with people closer to my age and really round out my time at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center. I would also have liked to help more in the Senior Center and learn a little bit more about the center. I was unable to help the elderly as much and I feel it would have been a good experience to help someone a little different.  Lastly, I would have like to work a little bit more in food and in donations. I feel if I had worked a little bit more in food I would have been able to help more of the clients find what they need. Also, I would have liked to help with donations because I feel this was their busiest times of the year. Even though I regret not doing some things at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center I feel that I helped in many other ways.
Over the course of this experience at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center I have changed and grown as a person. For example, I helped people I didn’t know and I helped them in a time of crisis for them. I helped them find clothes, food, and helped them get toys for their children. I sorted donations and checked for expired dates on cans. Also, I saw what they were going through and I saw what hardships come with poverty. This opened my eyes to what was going on around me in my neighborhood, my country, and the world. I also learned from my research and the experiences I had at the Pawcatuck Neighborhood Center. For example, I learned that the people experiencing poverty are not the only ones that are affected by poverty, everyone is. Also, if people were poor they wouldn’t be able to go to school, by food, or toys everything I take for granted. This project showed me how lucky I am to be me. My assessment has helped me grow as a person and show me the world outside my home.
My assessment project was a wonderful experience to have in my 8th grade year. I met knew people and saw new things. I also did new experiences like packing food, checking dates on cans, and sorting clothes. I learned about people who needed my help. I also learned that everyone deserves a chance at happiness because everyone is equal. I started going their because of my assessment, but now I go back to help the people in need in my neighborhood.

Essay #8

Mildness of the World:

An Essay About What Mildness Means and How it is in My Life and In To Kill A Mockingbird
Essay by: Ashlyn Buffum
8th Grade
   Pine Point School
January 28, 2012





Are you kind? Can you be calm in any situation? many people can’t but some can. For example, people in my life and also the characters in the book To Kill A Mockingbird. If everyone was calm there would be a lot less fighting. Mildness many different people have it in To Kill A Mockingbird and my life.
Atticus staying calm during the trial
TS: n the book To Kill A Mocking Bird there are many characters who are mild and also opposite of mild. SD: For example, Atticus the father of Scout and Jem is very tranquil, he calmly speaks and tries to never yell at Scout or Jem, and he is also very calm in the face of danger. CM: For example, “Nobody got out. We saw Atticus look up from his Newspaper. He closed it, folded it deliberately, dropped it in his lap, and pushed his hat to the back of his head. He seemed to expecting them.” CM: Reading Atticus showed no fear when men came closer and closer to where he was sitting under the light bulb in front of the Maycomb jail. SD: Also, two other characters in the book show something reverse from calmness, but they continue to grow. CM: Scout in the beginning of the book was always prepared for a fight. CM: For example, “Catching Walter Cunningham in the schoolyard gave me some pleasure, but when I was rubbing his nose in the dirt Jem came by and told me to stop. “You’re bigger’n he is,” he said”. SD: Jem as well until he started grow older and become more responsible the same as Scout.C:  There are many dissimilar traits to the characters in To Kill A Mockingbird and the Finch family is one of the families that stay calm the best they can in any situation.
        TS: Not only are there calm and patient people in To Kill A Mockingbird but also in my life. SD: For example, My parents are always kind and always try to be calm. CM: They always calm when I am not and help me get through a crisis. CM: Loving my parents’ stroll with me through the steps that I take when I was first started to walk to the time when I started my 8th grade year and they will continue to be by my side for the rest of my life. SD: My friends also are very calm in some situations but like Scout and Jem we are still growing. SD:  I also try to be patient and calm during my life. CM: Sitting I look calmly up at the Stars remembering past memories and the people who cared for me with gentleness and the love  they showed me over the years of my life. SD: If every family were like my family there would be no more war in the world and everyone would be calm and gentle to each other. CM: Also, if everyone kind to each other no one would be hurt on purpose. CM: Peace is something to be achieved by the simplest of tasks. CM: For example, just saying something kind to soothe someone’s mind and bring a little piece of peace into his or her lives. C: Peace can be achieved by being mild and calm and anyone can do it.
From peace to people mildness affects lots of people. Even in To Kill A Mockingbird had people who were mild and also my life has people who try to be calm in a crisis. Everyone can be calm and gentle with others to make the world a better place. Everyone can make a difference in the world.

Essay #9

The Power of Words and Actions:

An Essay About Equality and What It Means and How it’s In My Life and To Kill A Mockingbird
An Essay by: Ashlyn Buffum
8th Grade
Pine Point School
February 13, 2012


helping others
Helping others is something most of us do. We help each other overcome hurdles in our lives. “But there is one way in this country in which all men are created equal-there is one human institution that makes a pauper the equal of a Rockefeller, the stupid man the equal of an Einstein, and the ignorant man the equal of any college president. That institution, gentlemen, is a court.” The quote which shows that we all can stand up for one another.
Atticus helping Tom
This quote is not just showing Atticus fighting for Tom Robinson but also fighting for all African Americans fairness in court. Atticus, defending Tom, talked to the jury about fairness and an equal court. The story takes place when blacks and whites did not walk hand in hand. The courts were unequal African Americans were always found guilty. This quote also shows that the times are changing and that people want to live in peace with each other. This book tells the truth in real history there was a time when blacks and whites were separated. Also the books changes so does real life now we live in peace. We can always count on the fairness of our courts form a traffic court to the Supreme court. We are now judged by our character and not by how we look. In my life we live in peace. We have fairness, but we still must strive for everlasting peace in the way Atticus told in his speech
Helping others can result in peace. In the Time To Kill a Mockingbird there was know peace and no justice in the court system. Now we can live happily, but still striving for the peace that still slips through our grasp. This a quote that I feel inspires hope in all hearts that there is a better world to come.



Self assessment

1.) An issue I am currently working on is making my sentences are long by combining them. Also, taking my time and not rushing my essay.
2) One of the strongest things I feel in this essay is my Introduction. I feel it hooks people into wanting to read the essay.
3) One possible weak point I see is my body paragraph I feel I might have not organized it as well as I could have.

Essay #7

trapped in a cage
scout runs into the light

The Cage of Life:
The Comparison Between Chapter 15 in To Kill A Mockingbird, a Bird in a Cage, and Your Life
An Essay by: Ashlyn Buffum
January 10, 2012
8th Grade English
Pine Point School
        Ever you ever been trapped in the cage of life and no way out? In the book To Kill A Mockingbird when I read chapter 15 I thought that a cage was slowly closing in on Scout and her family. Also, not only can a cage trap some one in a book but also in real life. For example, In my life I have had many instances. There are so many parts in my life and in the life of Scout that trap us in a cage.
       There are so many kinds of cages and so many kinds of people in both fiction and reality. “Jem shrieked and tried to catch me, but I had a lead on him and Dill. I pushed my way through dark smelly bodies and burst into the circle of light.” In this incident Scout runs to Atticus straight into an angry mob. Scout had just run into a cage. These people had trapped her in a situation she didn’t want to be in, but let her go in the end. While in reality sometimes you don’t get away so easily. For example, in my life and in all of our lives we are penalized for what we do wrong. You must always be vigilant and make sure you are doing the best you can. For example, In my life with assessment and applications coming up I’m stuck in my cage of what I have to do before the year is up and what I must do well. This kind of cage is called the cage of life with its bars making sure that the bird can’t fly up into the sky. Flying and wheeling on the wind the little bird rose up into the sky. There are so many kinds of cages and so many different lives with so many different problems In both fiction and reality.
        Everyone has there own cage because everyone is different. Even if they are in a book or in real life there will always be some sort of cage in there life to trap them. This cage will restrict them from flying and flying high in sky. We are all different and still have cages that restrict us but we still sing with all our hearts with the hope that someday we will be free.